Nuevamente el tiempo se me fue a la mierda, y en mi segundo ensayo del listening baje 0.5 pero en el reading subi 0.5 asi que quedé igual ... vamos flaytech q se puede!!!
La pregunta era:
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
El ensayo de hoy es:
In social science or economic studies it is a common practice to define concepts from its characteristics. In this essay the definition of a wealthy or a poor nation will be addressed in that way.
A wealthy nation should have, as descriptive characteristics, a good economic behaviour, democratic stability and high education standards among others. One of the most suitable ways to define the richness or poverty of any nation is taking into account its education standards. Therefore, this short essay will be based on this topic and how the nations should share experiences and human capital in order to improve the education standards in their countries.
The principal objective of any government, whether the nation is wealthy or poor, is to assure a high standard education to their citizens or at least the access to education. Consequently, it is responsibility of the governments of poor nations to work on this topic and to concentrate their efforts on improve their educational standards. Nevertheless, the wealthy nations must help to the poor nations giving advice based on their own experience. This help should be materialized through academic interchanges of both students and academic staff, offering fully-funded scholarship to outstanding students of poor countries, planning academic curricula together and working in pure and applied research focus on the topics of interest of the poor nation. The benefits are evident, for the poor nation citizen the opportunity to prosecute graduate studies is invaluable and for the host university and the country itself may expand its relationship with different foreign academics and their cultural variety, which is an important topic of any well-reputed university.
In summary, the wealthy nations must share their wealth with poor nations. The governments of poor nations must concentrate their efforts assuring a good access to education and to look for agreement with wealthy nations. The responsibilities must be shared among the nations.
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Si lo se, el ensayo no dice nada nuevo y no puedo y no quiero salirme de los temas que me interesan, pa los otros temas hay harto gil dando vuelta. Nuevamente cualquier comentario, corrección o opinión sobre el tema será de gran ayuda.
Flaytech
A wealthy nation should have, as descriptive characteristics, a good economic behaviour, democratic stability and high education standards among others. One of the most suitable ways to define the richness or poverty of any nation is taking into account its education standards. Therefore, this short essay will be based on this topic and how the nations should share experiences and human capital in order to improve the education standards in their countries.
The principal objective of any government, whether the nation is wealthy or poor, is to assure a high standard education to their citizens or at least the access to education. Consequently, it is responsibility of the governments of poor nations to work on this topic and to concentrate their efforts on improve their educational standards. Nevertheless, the wealthy nations must help to the poor nations giving advice based on their own experience. This help should be materialized through academic interchanges of both students and academic staff, offering fully-funded scholarship to outstanding students of poor countries, planning academic curricula together and working in pure and applied research focus on the topics of interest of the poor nation. The benefits are evident, for the poor nation citizen the opportunity to prosecute graduate studies is invaluable and for the host university and the country itself may expand its relationship with different foreign academics and their cultural variety, which is an important topic of any well-reputed university.
In summary, the wealthy nations must share their wealth with poor nations. The governments of poor nations must concentrate their efforts assuring a good access to education and to look for agreement with wealthy nations. The responsibilities must be shared among the nations.
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Si lo se, el ensayo no dice nada nuevo y no puedo y no quiero salirme de los temas que me interesan, pa los otros temas hay harto gil dando vuelta. Nuevamente cualquier comentario, corrección o opinión sobre el tema será de gran ayuda.
Flaytech
3 comentarios:
"fully-funded scholarship to outstanding students of poor countries...."
no sería:
country in way of development?
the wealthy nations must share their wealth with poor nations
should?
a ganarle a brazil el domingo! me salio el shileno
Hola Daniel, gracias por darte el tiempo de leer esa mierda tan fome.
En cuanto a tu primera sugerencia, sí, sería mas lógico colocar:
developing countries,
en vez the poor countries (que misero suena la wea)
Mas q nada me guie por el encabezado de la pregunta.
Respecto a la segunda, el "must" lo coloqué pa tratar de enfatizar el "deber" como una obligación, pero en realidad no tienen la obligacion estos chatos, asi q deberia haber puesto el "should", incluso podria haber ocupado el "ought to" q le lleva connotacion moral. En fin, lamentablemente todas estas cosas me surgen cuando ya hice la wea de ensayo y por lo general despues de 40 minutos, es decir cuando ya estoy cagao con el tiempo. A seguir practicando no mas...
Y por cierto, si ganan esos weones del futbol sera el tremendo tapabocas pa mi, yo casi aposte a que llegaban cero puntos de vuelta los socios...
Viva Chile mierda!!! y vamos por la copa America!!
"ought to", todo el rato.
agregado a mi votatil Ram...
ya perdiste la apuesta
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